Our focus statement is "Rock Sprouts Flower" and basically its about a dirty old rock that gets kicked and thrown around and then eventually it gets thrown into the ocean. A little girl walks along the shoreline of the beach and the rock washes up right next to her foot. In the first scene, it shows the rock getting kicked and then someone picks it up and throws it. In the second scene, The girl is walking on the beach and the rock washes up and then she picks the rock up. In the third scene, she walks home and she places the rock on her desk. In the fourth scene, Taylor takes the rock to wherever she goes and the flower on the rock starts to sprout. In the fifth scene, she notices the little flower on the rock and at the end the flower become beautiful and big. The conflict is a sad looking rock gets thrown and kicked around. The resolution to the conflict is that the rock gets found and cared for by a little girl.
The critique of my team and I was pretty accurate for our metamorphosis animation project. We got mostly threes and I agree with that because our project could’ve been better but everyone learns from their mistakes. Even though we could've done better on our metamorphosis, In the amount of time that we had we tried to do out best but didn't reach our full potential. Our scenes were high quality so maybe thats why we finished our animation right before our critique. Overall, I am pretty proud of what we made and hopefully will be better next time.
I really like the acting in your animation it felt like it was done professionally.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that I would fix on your animation is the audio.
But besides that this animation was super cute and smooth flowing. Great job!
Thanks for the feedback Jaesha, I agree and will take that into consideration if I ever do this project again.
DeleteI really love how your storyboard is very organized and well done. Also, your writing has such a good flow, I could understand everything you were saying clearly.
ReplyDeleteThanks teammate, we did a great job together.
DeleteHey I really like all your pictures in your blog, they are very unique and your sense of style makes your blog look very fun and creative. I really like how you put your vimeo video in your blog! You did very well on your vimeo video.
ReplyDeleteThanks Blossom, your blog looks really nice too.
DeleteAshley, your storyboard is very neat and organized, that's how you get things done and on it! Good job on being on track.
ReplyDeleteYour always on track to Kyla. Keep up the good work.
DeleteI thought you did a great job on this animation. There was good audio, the shots were filmed really well and it was really clear and easy to follow.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I actually had the time to watch yours and commented on it, it was a very nice animation.
DeleteI really like the moral of your story and think you did an awesome job! :)
ReplyDeleteI like how the rock changes into a flower. That's a cool idea, and definitely not something that normally happens. Good music too!
ReplyDeleteYour whole animation was outstanding. Good job!
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