AlfilerA VisualPoem from Kapaa Middle School MEDIA on Vimeo.
My poem was about The Kapa'a Eagles Cheer Team. This Visual Poem was about The Kapa'a Eagles Cheer Team because Thats what I do for life and I love doing it. Cheering is my second thing thats means the most to me. My Visuals have an impact on me because if I don't try or don't go to practice that would be a huge impact on me a big bad impact. I come to practice ready and prepared to do stunts, cheers, jumps, stretching and lots of other stuff. Cheering is another impact on my life cheering helps me overcome my fears and cheering also helps me in life when I have nothing to do because I dont like to stay at home all day.
My special affects show what I love which is gymnastics and The Kapa'a Eagles Cheer Team. The special affects changes my mood by showing me what I can do and what i could do better. My special affects help me find what i'm really good at and what I could do better to achieve my goals. Special affects help me cover up the mistakes I made or give me extra time for the beginning of each scene. Special affects are very hard to work with but if you know how to use it then it would be easier for you to use.
I'm not that satisfied with my results because I had a blade cut and my camera was moving a lot so I could have done way better but I guess I thought that I should rush because the time was almost done. I could have made it better by Making sure there were no blade cuts and putting different videos and images.
My special affects show what I love which is gymnastics and The Kapa'a Eagles Cheer Team. The special affects changes my mood by showing me what I can do and what i could do better. My special affects help me find what i'm really good at and what I could do better to achieve my goals. Special affects help me cover up the mistakes I made or give me extra time for the beginning of each scene. Special affects are very hard to work with but if you know how to use it then it would be easier for you to use.
I'm not that satisfied with my results because I had a blade cut and my camera was moving a lot so I could have done way better but I guess I thought that I should rush because the time was almost done. I could have made it better by Making sure there were no blade cuts and putting different videos and images.
I really like your B-roll
ReplyDeleteThe music is a little distracting in the background
Your writing is really good
I liked your photos
ReplyDeleteThe back round noises were loud
Great topic
It was so interesting learning about you and your cheer team!
ReplyDeleteThe music in the background was kind of distracting.
Your B-Roll really gave an image to it!
B-roll was great!
ReplyDeleteVoice cuts off at the end
I love the poem
I like all the shots of your team working
ReplyDeleteSome shots are a bit long
I like the ending shot
I like your topic
ReplyDeleteIt has a lot of background noices
I like you shots
I like the imagery.
ReplyDeleteThe audio needs some work.
I like the transitions.
Good dialogue.
ReplyDeleteMusic in the background is distracting.
Really cool video of your team practicing.
1. I like that you showed what you do to cheer
ReplyDelete2. Voice got cut
3. All the videos and photos shows me how hard you work on cheering
I like all of your creative b roll
ReplyDeleteyour voice got cut out too quickly at the end
I like your music
I really like the different stunts you filmed
ReplyDeletemaybe a bit less background noises
I really like the writing
Nice close up B-roll.
ReplyDeleteIts was pretty noisey.
Really cool stuff.
I like your videos
ReplyDeleteyou could have more B-roll
I like your poem
Good B-roll
ReplyDeletecut voice off at the end
good voice overs
I like all of the B-roll
ReplyDeleteyou should have cut out the background noises
great movement shots
I like your b-roll
ReplyDeletecut voice off at the end
good poem
I really like the different shots of you and you team.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I would change is that the music in the back round you could of softened that.
I loved the shots of you flipping.
The videos of when you lift people up in the air is really cool.
ReplyDeleteSome of the videos had music and it was a little too loud.
I like your writing!
nice b-roll
ReplyDeleteyou could have more b-roll
nice shots of your team practicing
I like all the shots
ReplyDeleteThere was some back round noise
I like the variety of videos you got
Your whole video is so amazing
ReplyDeletethere could be more videos of stunts
and it was so cool that you did more than one stunt
•I like the Variety of b-roll
ReplyDelete•The b-roll had a lot of background noises
•The writing was good
Nice B-roll
ReplyDeleteIn the middle you sort of stutterd
Nice music
I liked the B-Roll of you doing a marvelous front handspring!
ReplyDeleteThe one thing I think that could have been improved was providing a bit more B-Roll variety.
Your voiceovers were very articulate!
What amazing things you guys can do!
ReplyDeleteThere were some jump cuts and no audio pad.
Great Poem!
Audio was really good
ReplyDeleteThere was an early cut at the end
Really good b-roll